Thursday, February 19, 2009

Duplicitous She

She
Stoic

Stands
Wanting to run

Calls
to me

my name,
to love

Wanting
ture love

holding
her dreams in check

herself
punished

denying
for me

herself!



She
stands,
calls my name.
Wanting.
Holding
Herself.
Denying
herself!

Stoic
wanting
to run
to me
to love
ture love
her dreams in check
punished
for me.

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2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really like the play on words here!

8:09 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is interesting. Three different messages in one poem. One read straight through, one reading only first lines, one reading only second lines and one reading first then second in succession, so I guess thats actually 4 poems in one!

8:10 AM  

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